Transgression
After present the topic, idea and theme of the Project 2, the comment for me is to think more about the content of the story. The draft of my idea and story outline is not clear and too simple, I need to try to think out some special things in the story that can let people interested to watch.
For my first idea, I just think of a boy that he meet problems and then take drug to solve the sadness problem and then he know that is not a good way and he give up take drug.
After thinking about the story for some days, I have change some about the story. The story now is a boy that he saw some strange people doing something and he try to follow them to see what happened. One of those strange people drop one box on the ground and the boy pick it up and try to touch the thing inside. He find that it is happy to touch the things and he start to find those strange people to ask for those boxes. The boy start loving to live in that happy moment and try to dress like those strange people. At the end, the boy want to go back to original life and he find that he can't go back and stay in that fake live forever.
The story still not yet done and I still need time to think and make it more interesting.
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